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Jeff Macfee's 'The Contest' and Exploring the Narrative as Puzzle

Jeff Macfee's 'The Contest' and Exploring the Narrative as Puzzle

It's like a darker Disneyland in there.

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Nick Kolakowski
Feb 12, 2025
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I was lucky enough to read Jeff Macfee’s new thriller, ‘The Contest,’ a few months before release. The book mostly takes place in a theme park named Miscellany, famous worldwide for its games and puzzles. A former child prodigy named Gillian Charles, down on her luck, is hired to figure out who’s leaking Miscellany’s secrets. Along the way, there’s a solid dose of death and deceit and mind-benders, but the narrative is more than that—as Gillian progresses, the story mutates into a fascinating exploration of loss, comebacks, and reckoning with one’s past obsessions and doubts.

The book plays a bit like ‘Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory’ updated for our ultra-vicious capitalist times, or maybe a somewhat darker take on Disneyland. If you’re a writer, particularly one who focuses on thrillers, it’s well worth reading for how Macfee utilizes puzzles to express Gillian’s emotional arc at that moment; if you’re a reader, it’s a fun ride. I asked Macfee a few questions about the book’s o…

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